澳洲留学申请书（精选7篇）
材料不全，直接拒签：在我们的以往印象里移民局的工作人员服务很周到，当我们缺少提供签证必需的材料时，会很贴心地发邮件通知需要补交的文件。但从今年起，材料不全的常规类申请时会有被直接拒签的风险，因此在最终提交材料前要检查清楚呦。
GTE要点明确：GTE为真实临时入境声明。该声明针对办理留学签证的国际学生，并对其留学意图和在澳洲滞留风险作出评估，20xx年移民局对GTE声明进行了更新，要求声明中包含以下三个要点：一、过去的学习与工作情况，有无间隔年、间隔时间;二、若来澳洲所学专业与之前的专业或工作背景不相关，解释原因;三、说明在澳洲学习将如何帮助实现未来的人生计划。
诚实上报拒签记录：一直以来，申请学生签证，我们只需要向签证官提供澳洲的签证历史记录就行。但现在澳洲移民局扩大了审核范围，不仅包括申请者曾经去过的所有国家，且包括申请者所有家庭成员记录，不管其是否打算去澳洲。
生活学习方面
打工时间更灵活：新政出台后，澳洲允许留学生打工的时间从每周20个小时增至每两周40个小时，虽然总时长没有变化，但同学们能给为灵活地安排打工和学习时间。
187签证需要工作经验：187签证也叫偏远地区雇主担保签证，只要符合要求并成功签下，就能一步到位获得永居身份。但从今年3月起，想申请187工作签证的需要有三年的工作经验!
NATTI内部考试取消：想要获得NATTI二级认证的同学必须参加统一的外部口笔译考试。内部考试是由学校内部出题，通过率相对较高，而外部考试则由NATTI官方出题，题目难且考试通过率较低。现在内部考试取消了，对同学的英语能力是一项挑战。
总的来说，在政策方面，去年没有重大变革，意味着今年的走向也可能以平稳为主，但不排除可能在低龄留学，语言课程配置等方面会有改革。在澳洲生活学习的开销虽然增加，但考虑到汇率走低，对准备去澳洲留学的学生还是有利的。
澳洲留学费用方面
最低生活费标准上涨：今年2月，澳洲移民局给出了最新的生活费参考标准，学生个人在澳洲12个月的所需的生活费从目前的19830AUD/年上涨至20290AUD/年，相当于一年增加了910澳元(约4500人民币)。
学费上涨：从20xx年3月起，澳元汇率跌破5.0，一路跌到4.7-4.8，汇率降低有利于学生去澳洲留学，但澳洲大学的学费也在逐年上涨中。不过，澳洲大学的学费为每年调整一次，机智的家长和学生需尽早准备申请学校，尽早办理签证，以此来节省一笔留学费用。
Dear ,
The personal data enclosed in this application file will demonstrate myprofile as a child prodigy who entered into Jilin University at 16 and joinedthe country's topmost scientific research institution as a graduate student at20. Now with an engineering experience of 4 years at the age of 24, I would liketo scale still higher intellectual heights by pursuing advanced studies, aneducation process that I hope will gain me the competitive edge for personalgrowth and push me to the forefront of scientific progress.
Immersed in the academic atmosphere of an intellectual family, I wasencouraged in my early childhood by my parents to read books in a wide range ofdisciplines. With this privileged background, I attended primary school at 6, atleast one year earlier than the normal admission age of 7 or older. I felt solucky-God blessed me with so many natural gifts. At an early age I showed anatural talent in mathematics and a strong memory, the attributes that enabledme to excel my classmates, especially in such challenging subjects asmathematics, physics and chemistry. I took part in a variety of provincial andnational contests, demonstrating my excellent academic skills and wining manyprizes.
Blessed with my academic potence, I was able to finish my primary andsecondary education in 10 years, two years ahead of the usual twelve years. At16, I entered a privileged class specially designed for the gifted students atJilin University, a cradle of scientific and technological talents in China. Theclass selects only 90 students out of more than 1000 child prodigies acrossChina each year. (Jilin University is a prestigious university of generaleducation with 20 departments and a regular annual enrollment of 1,500 students)I studied at Electrical Engineering (E. E) Department, a highly selectivedepartment with a gathering of smart students who are hard to compete with.
Four years of undergraduate studies had me well trained in a wide range ofdisciplines, and my outstanding academic performance encouraged me to pursue anadvanced degree. With a concentration on mathematics, communication andcomputer, I studied a variety of courses in my undergraduate years, among whichwere Higher Mathematics, Probability Statistics and Stochastic Process, Theoriesof Signal and Information, High Frequency Circuits and Principles of ModernCommunications Systems, Computer Principle and other courses in the ElectronicTechnology field. I also studied Western culture, History and Economics in orderto build up a good base for my education. With a wish to build a solidfoundation for my future research and study, I was fully devoted to my academictraining at college. My hard work proved to be successful. My overall GPA of3.57/4.0 ranked in the top one percent of my class. Upon graduation in 1994, Iwon easy acceptance into Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications as agraduate student at 20, an age when most Chinese students would be just startingtheir university education. At this university, I narrowed my academic interestdown to the area of mobile communications and digital communications.
My MA education proved to be another period of fruitful and successfulacademic pursuits. Among the courses I selected were Probability Theory, ISDN& ATM, SPC, Digital Signal Processing, Personal Communications, C++language. These disciplinary training prepared me to delve deeper in the studyof electrical engineering and communications. To keep me informed of the latestdevelopments in my field and to brush up my English language skills, I also readthe latest professional journals and periodicals of the telecommunications on aregular basis. Burning the course of my MA program, my outstanding academicrecords won me various scholarships in seven consecutive years, among which, toname a few, were Excellent Students, Excellent Person, Excellent fellowship.
To garnish this writing with other personal activities other than academicachievements, I need to mention my perfect performance in a dancing contest atJilin University, which won me the first prize.
Anyway, looking back at my campus life, I feel confident to say that I havefulfilled the education goal to my satisfaction.
Teaching ExperienceI worked as a teaching assistant at the ElectronicsCircuit Group in Personal Communications in my third semester at BeijingUniversity of Posts and Telecommunications. I taught product applications andthe telecommunications development in China. I trained the students bytheoretical approach and also taught them how to solve real problems bypractical means. I found the teaching position so much enjoyable. The dailyacademic exchanges between the students and myself were beneficial to bothparties. I believe that my students enjoyed my teaching too because my classeswere well attended.
Starting from April 1998, I worked as a part-time teacher at HPcorporation. Later I was also employed by Software Center Motorola, China. Itaught Motorola customers the principle of CDMA (Code Division Multiple Access)and the usage of the HP instruments for testing CDMA Base station and CDMAHandset. Motorola customers were all satisfied with my teaching. I not onlygrasped advanced knowledge but also, more importantly, learned how to be a goodteacher.
Research ExperienceIn the second year of my graduate studies, I began towork as research assistant of Professor Dacheng Yang, a renowned expert indigital and mobile communication Research and Design Center of Ministry of Postsand Telecommunications. After learning the background, application, principle,and advantage of CDMA, I selected the signaling design of the CDMA Base StationInterface as my research topic. I evaluated and studied the protocols IS-95,IS-634 and the ULTRA interface protocols of Lucent. Applying softwareengineering method and Oriented-Object approach, I designed the internalinterface of Base Station System between BSC and BTS-Abis interface, which isone of the most important parts of such a large and sophisticated project. Thenreferring to protocols LAPD/LAPF, integrating the latest knowledge and using onestep. By working on this project, I learned more about CDMA, GSM and othermobile communications systems. Later I felt so proud to hear what I had done wasdownloaded to the board and the design ran flawlessly.
Working ExperienceAfter I obtained my MA degree in engineering in 1997, Iwas employed by a telecommunication branch company of Posts &Telecommunications Industry Company. I participated in the JSU18 switchingSystem Project, which is planned to produce the sixth largest switching systemin China's own switching systems. I was in charge of the No.7 signaling sectionand developed the trunk communication system. Referring to protocol Q. 764, etc,I designed the TUP (Telephone User Part) & ISUP (ISDN User Part) - the mostimportant part of a switching system-with C++ Language. By now, I have finishedthe software flow of CPC (call process) of these two parts. Through programming,downloading the procedure into the real switching system, debugging and testing,I came to deeply understand the call process of the large switching system andthe relationship between all the modules of a large switching system. Theprocedure that I completed is so good that we can call successfully throughit.
In working on these two projects, I cultivated diligent work habits,independent research ability and team spirit. I feel I have the potential forfurther further academic growth and am ready to take up the challenge ofadvanced studies in my chosen field.
From August 1998, I joined Software center Motorola, China and got involvedin the CDMA project. We must communicate with international customers on afrequent basis in English environment. So I not only learned about the excellentsoftware development process and various branches of advanced knowledge, butalso improved my English ability. Here, we often exchange our findings atpresentations given by others and myself in English. I get a lot of technicaland non - technical training, in such subjects as Software Product Process, CDMA( Code Division Multiple Access), GSM, GPRS ( General Packet Radio Service - thethird generation system of GSM), TTCN ( Tree and Tabular Combined Notation - atest language), ITEX ( Interactive TTCN Editor and executor - a test tool forthe TTCN language), and even English language.
Purpose of StudyI learn greedily, but the more I am trained, the moredeeply I realize what I learned earlier is not enough. I have not got a chanceto lead a major project, although I have been moving on a smooth career path andalways finished my part of every project immaculately. As a female engineer, Imust learn more to compete with most male engineers to lead a major project. Andin spite of all my achievements, I feel that I have not brought my intellectualcapabilities into full play. So I desire to enter your esteemed university topursue advanced studies so that I can lay a solid foundation for my futureresearch work. In the meantime, I will be able to improve my English, and I hopethat someday I can speak English as well as Chinese.
I believe I have acquired the necessary theoretical framework and practicalexperience for advanced studies. Equipped with the ability to teach myself andconduct independent research, I will be able to attain competence quickly inareas that I may at first know very little about. I never work just to finish anassignment, but instead I always try conscientiously to learn as much aspossible and sharpen my expertise through the work I do. Keeping this workstyle, I have become highly skilled in such fields as switching system'strunking system (communications and software), Code Division Multiple Accesssystem (mobile communications and software), SDT & TTCN (CASE and testtools), and pSOS+ system (real-time operation system). These achievements wouldbe a great help in my pursuit of advanced education, especially when I can workunder the seasoned guidance of your strong faculty. My previous experience willqualify me for the TA and RA positions of your university as well.
I would like to apply to do graduate studies in the United States where theresearch and education in global telecommunications are leading the world. Ihave long admired your esteemed university known for its demanding work ethicsand nurturing academic atmosphere. I am confident that I can receive a highquality education on your PhD program. If I am accepted, I am also confidentthat I can make quick progress in the E. E field, especially in the areas ofwireless communication, communication, digital signal processing, thedisciplines that share many common characteristics and important principles.Given the broad applications of these technologies, I believe the progress wemake in these areas will help shape the future of the mankind. I would like tobe at the forefront of such progress. As I am well trained and broadlyexperienced in EE and computer science, you may find me more than qualified foradvanced studies in areas other than those I have mentioned. If so, I would begrateful to your appreciation and would like to hear any advice that you mayhave for me. Upon completion of the program, I will return to my homeland andstrive to make scientific contributions that both your university and I can beproud of.
Yours sincerely,
一、澳洲留学资金怎么准备
1、存款要尽早
澳洲留学是件必须早早规划的事。比如你为留学预备的存款，这个存款不只是留学期间在澳大利亚的花费，还有部分澳大利亚大学在申请时就会要求你递交一定的存款证明，通常对存款时间的要求为半年。因此如果没有提前完成必要的资金准备，将会导致存款期限太短，达不成人家的要求。而钱不会从天而降，所有的存款都需要时间累积，于是尽早做好澳洲留学费用的资金规划就显得很有必要了。
2、购汇，大量还是分批
获得签证后的准备工作更多了。首先是购汇，受澳元汇率以及澳大利亚留学生政策的影响，澳大利亚留学的总费用也在不断变化。如何根据外汇汇率的变动合理购汇、降低留学的成本也是不得不考虑的问题。其实这个问题有点类似于在投资上的定投基金，只不过投资基金是为了稳定收益，而定投外汇是为了稳定留学成本。
二、澳洲留学费用
1、学费
澳大利亚是最受欢迎的大学留学目的地之一，但与英国和美国一样，它也是最昂贵的目的地之一。然而，各地区差异很大，在排除去澳洲留学的可能性之前，值得探索所有途径。例如，国际学生可以在学期开学前提前支付费用，这有助于在学期内进行预算。国际本科生可以预期支付2万至4.5万澳元每年。在澳大利亚，本科学位持续3至4年。硕士学位的费用为22000-50000澳元。兽医和医学学位的费用要比这个高得多。以澳大利亚国立大学为例，文科学士每年的费用为38400澳元，医学学士每年的费用约为51360澳元。澳大利亚的费用一般是按单位计算，而不是按年计算。大多数学生将学习不同频段的单元组合，每个单元都属于不同的频段和成本计算–所以所有学生每年要支付不同的金额。
2、住宿费用(房租等)
住宿费用根据类型和地区的不同而不同：在澳大利亚西部和北部各州，比较乡村的地区会便宜很多，而比较城市的地区，比如悉尼周边，费用会比较高，尤其是在市中心的时候。校内住宿一般为每月440-1100澳元，寄宿家庭每月450-1200澳元，合租房每月380-850澳元。
三、澳洲留学优势
1、宜学宜居的环境
澳大利亚许多城市诸如悉尼、墨尔本、布里斯班、阿德莱德等都曾被评为世界上最适合居住的城市。澳洲整体环境优美，空气清新，气候温和，而且社会稳定治安良好，是全世界犯罪率最低的国家之一，整体犯罪率仅为7%左右。
同时，澳大利亚与国内时差相近，夏季比国内早三小时，冬季比国内早两小时，因此学生和家长联络沟通非常方便。
2、学历认可度高，课程设置多元化
澳洲有42所大学和高等院校，毕业于这些院校的学生的学历资格被世界200多个国家(包括中国)广泛认可。且专业设置非常全面，众多专业更是名列世界前列，比如工程、生物、通讯、金融和会计等，满足学生专业选择多样性的要求。澳大利亚留学期间，不同层次的学习，不同院校间的转换，都可以进行学分互认。
3、世界顶尖的教育质量
澳大利亚是全球公认的拥有世界上非常先进、极具创新的教育和培训体系的国家之一，政府对国内学校的教育水平和质量非常重视，要求非常严格，各层次的教育无论是大学，TAFE学院，中学教育，甚至是语言学校，都有非常全面完整的质量保障措施，保证了了高品质的教育水准。澳洲有八所大学进入世界百强，超过60%的大学排名世界五百强。
1、符合西方思维习惯
文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。在以往的经历中发现，有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点，反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见;而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的，认为这些能表现出申请人充满个性。所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材，把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来，在适当地留学文书里展示出来。
2、突出重点，主线明确
澳洲留学申请文书写作中要清楚有力地表达您的求学动机，和学习学术能力。在国内有一种错误的观点，个人陈述要“煽情”才能有效果。有的留学申请人就通过描述不相干活动展示“独特”的性格，或是学术上感觉没有什么可写的，就写自己考试时克服了重重困难，如何考取了好成绩。这是根本不着边际的写法，会让录取者发掘不到你的特点。要知道，个人陈述是要在很短的时间内，清楚地用几百字告诉招生教授你是入学非常合格的人选，盲目“煽情”完全不需要。
千万别描述你如何地历尽劫难，别乱下结论，你不可能因为愤怒和苦难而脱颖而出。
3、结构简单
衔接紧密留学文书其实是你个人的广告。要重点突出，形象鲜明。仔细想想，留下深刻印象的广告哪个不是简明而富有创意的?许多申请人往往想把自己的全部优点都写出来告诉教授，觉得这样才能全面的展现自己。但是试想一下，招生教授天天都要做大量的教学工作，还要抽出时间阅读数量可观的留学申请资料，只有那种简单有力的文章才能让人印象深刻。
千万别对失败找借口，解释为什么没有成功。最重要的是写出你做了些什么来捱过挫败，然而，除了疾病的不可预见状况外，别为成绩不好或糟糕的学期找借口。如果可能，请着重解释个人挫败怎样赋予你新的态度，使得你坚定地走向成功。不要大肆渲染你的个人闪光点，只要着重在这种个人心迹揭示中写出前因后果即可。
Dear ---,
The personal data enclosed in this application file will demonstrate myprofile as a child prodigy who entered into Jilin University at 16 and joinedthe country's topmost scientific research institution as a graduate student at20. Now with an engineering e-perience of 4 years at the age of 24, I would liketo scale still higher intellectual heights by pursuing advanced studies, aneducation process that I hope will gain me the competitive edge for personalgrowth and push me to the forefront of scientific progress.
Immersed in the academic atmosphere of an intellectual family, I wasencouraged in my early childhood by my parents to read books in a wide range ofdisciplines. With this privileged background, I attended primary school at 6, atleast one year earlier than the normal admission age of 7 or older. I felt solucky-God blessed me with so many natural gifts. At an early age I showed anatural talent in mathematics and a strong memory, the attributes that enabledme to e-cel my classmates, especially in such challenging subjects asmathematics, physics and chemistry. I took part in a variety of provincial andnational contests, demonstrating my e-cellent academic skills and wining manyprizes.
Blessed with my academic potence, I was able to finish my primary andsecondary education in 10 years, two years ahead of the usual twelve years. At16, I entered a privileged class specially designed for the gifted students atJilin University, a cradle of scientific and technological talents in China. Theclass selects only 90 students out of more than 1000 child prodigies acrossChina each year. (Jilin University is a prestigious university of generaleducation with 20 departments and a regular annual enrollment of 1,500 students)I studied at Electrical Engineering (E. E) Department, a highly selectivedepartment with a gathering of smart students who are hard to compete with.
Four years of undergraduate studies had me well trained in a wide range ofdisciplines, and my outstanding academic performance encouraged me to pursue anadvanced degree. With a concentration on mathematics, communication andcomputer, I studied a variety of courses in my undergraduate years, among whichwere Higher Mathematics, Probability Statistics and Stochastic Process, Theoriesof Signal and Information, High Frequency Circuits and Principles of ModernCommunications Systems, Computer Principle and other courses in the ElectronicTechnology field. I also studied Western culture, History and Economics in orderto build up a good base for my education. With a wish to build a solidfoundation for my future research and study, I was fully devoted to my academictraining at college. My hard work proved to be successful. My overall GPA of3.57/4.0 ranked in the top one percent of my class. Upon graduation in 1994, Iwon easy acceptance into Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications as agraduate student at 20, an age when most Chinese students would be just startingtheir university education. At this university, I narrowed my academic interestdown to the area of mobile communications and digital communications.
My MA education proved to be another period of fruitful and successfulacademic pursuits. Among the courses I selected were Probability Theory, ISDN& ATM, SPC, Digital Signal Processing, Personal Communications, C++language. These disciplinary training prepared me to delve deeper in the studyof electrical engineering and communications. To keep me informed of the latestdevelopments in my field and to brush up my English language skills, I also readthe latest professional journals and periodicals of the telecommunications on aregular basis. Burning the course of my MA program, my outstanding academicrecords won me various scholarships in seven consecutive years, among which, toname a few, were E-cellent Students, E-cellent Person, E-cellent fellowship.
To garnish this writing with other personal activities other than academicachievements, I need to mention my perfect performance in a dancing contest atJilin University, which won me the first prize.
Anyway, looking back at my campus life, I feel confident to say that I havefulfilled the education goal to my satisfaction.
Teaching E-perienceI worked as a teaching assistant at the ElectronicsCircuit Group in Personal Communications in my third semester at BeijingUniversity of Posts and Telecommunications. I taught product applications andthe telecommunications development in China. I trained the students bytheoretical approach and also taught them how to solve real problems bypractical means. I found the teaching position so much enjoyable. The dailyacademic e-changes between the students and myself were beneficial to bothparties. I believe that my students enjoyed my teaching too because my classeswere well attended.
Starting from April 1998, I worked as a part-time teacher at HPcorporation. Later I was also employed by Software Center Motorola, China. Itaught Motorola customers the principle of CDMA (Code Division Multiple Access)and the usage of the HP instruments for testing CDMA Base station and CDMAHandset. Motorola customers were all satisfied with my teaching. I not onlygrasped advanced knowledge but also, more importantly, learned how to be a goodteacher.
Research E-perienceIn the second year of my graduate studies, I began towork as research assistant of Professor Dacheng Yang, a renowned e-pert indigital and mobile communication Research and Design Center of Ministry of Postsand Telecommunications. After learning the background, application, principle,and advantage of CDMA, I selected the signaling design of the CDMA Base StationInterface as my research topic. I evaluated and studied the protocols IS-95,IS-634 and the ULTRA interface protocols of Lucent. Applying softwareengineering method and Oriented-Object approach, I designed the internalinterface of Base Station System between BSC and BTS-Abis interface, which isone of the most important parts of such a large and sophisticated project. Thenreferring to protocols LAPD/LAPF, integrating the latest knowledge and using onestep. By working on this project, I learned more about CDMA, GSM and othermobile communications systems. Later I felt so proud to hear what I had done wasdownloaded to the board and the design ran flawlessly.
Working E-perienceAfter I obtained my MA degree in engineering in 1997, Iwas employed by a telecommunication branch company of Posts &Telecommunications Industry Company. I participated in the JSU18 switchingSystem Project, which is planned to produce the si-th largest switching systemin China's own switching systems. I was in charge of the No.7 signaling sectionand developed the trunk communication system. Referring to protocol Q. 764, etc,I designed the TUP (Telephone User Part) & ISUP (ISDN User Part) - the mostimportant part of a switching system-with C++ Language. By now, I have finishedthe software flow of CPC (call process) of these two parts. Through programming,downloading the procedure into the real switching system, debugging and testing,I came to deeply understand the call process of the large switching system andthe relationship between all the modules of a large switching system. Theprocedure that I completed is so good that we can call successfully throughit.
In working on these two projects, I cultivated diligent work habits,independent research ability and team spirit. I feel I have the potential forfurther further academic growth and am ready to take up the challenge ofadvanced studies in my chosen field.
From August 1998, I joined Software center Motorola, China and got involvedin the CDMA project. We must communicate with international customers on afrequent basis in English environment. So I not only learned about the e-cellentsoftware development process and various branches of advanced knowledge, butalso improved my English ability. Here, we often e-change our findings atpresentations given by others and myself in English. I get a lot of technicaland non - technical training, in such subjects as Software Product Process, CDMA( Code Division Multiple Access), GSM, GPRS ( General Packet Radio Service - thethird generation system of GSM), TTCN ( Tree and Tabular Combined Notation - atest language), ITE- ( Interactive TTCN Editor and e-ecutor - a test tool forthe TTCN language), and even English language.
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澳洲留学文书写作要点一、围绕中心突出重点
无论申请者选择怎样的事例，表达怎样的观点，首先都应考虑清楚，这些素材是否值得描述，与自己的申请目标、学术目标、职业目标甚至人生目标是否相关。
确定了主题及其支撑信息之后，申请者则需要重点反思这些事件对自己的影响以及自己对此的看法，切忌洋洋洒洒就事件本身长篇大论。问问自己想要通过文书向学校树立一个什么样的形象，找到一个合适的切入点，再一点一滴地把这个形象起来。不赘言，不遗漏，围绕中心，突出重点，才能顺理成章。
澳洲留学文书写作要点二、简洁用词流畅行文
个人陈述的写作过程中应避免使用深奥晦涩的词汇，或引用并不具备广泛认知度的文章，尽量表达清楚、言简意赅，注意把握句子和段落之间自然、和谐的关系，并在要求的字数范围内完成。随后要检查是否有英文拼写或语法错误，但不必要在句式等方面反复纠结苛求。毕竟学校不会奢望学生的英文是完美无缺的。申请者所追求的应该是校方对文书逻辑性和合理性的一种认可。
澳洲留学文书写作要点三、诚恳认真不卑不亢
写作态度几乎决定了整篇文章的风格。一个成熟的申请者应该注意维护自己这些无形的品质。有硬伤(如GPA不高)的申请者可以适当为某些弱点做合理解释，条件较好者也不要表现得过分自信。没有必要对自己经历中的挫折讳莫如深，提及这些挫折的时候也不要表现出怀恨或者乞怜的负面情绪。
很多申请者自命不凡，没有特别突出的经历。或者有些申请者怨念自己写出来的文章没有让人眼前一亮的感觉。实际上，与其刻意追求这些虚无的东西，不如认真审视自己，坦诚地以分享的心态去叙述属于你个人的东西，就能让人产生共鸣。以真实为第一原则，必要时可以将有些内容适度调整或夸大，但要注意技巧，千万不能失真。
澳洲留学文书写作要点四、了解对象有的放矢
个人陈述是写给录取委员会的教授们看的，不同的学校有不同的情况，应该在写之前先研究透彻，有针对性地去阐述，这样才能合理地说明自己为什么要选择这个学校、这个专业，提出自己符合录取标准的观点才能令人信服，对自己将来学术前景和职业前景的展望才能让人觉得合情合理。 澳洲留学文书写作要点五、适当表达学术深度
这个原则被排序到最后是有原因的。例如去澳洲留学生活商科申请的特殊性，如果申请者盲目地阐述或评价一些理论观点，而这与很多录取委员会中来自该领域的资深老手并不在一个认识层面上，很有可能弄巧成拙或者达不到自己预期的目标。所以建议澳大利亚留学申请者谨慎使用。当然，适当介绍自己参与过的研究项目(包括课题的意义、自己所承担的具体工作及心得体会等)、表明自己将来的专业方向以及希望得到某位特定教授的指点还是可取的。
文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。在以往的经历中发现，有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点，反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见;而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的，认为这些能表现出申请人充满个性。所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材，把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来，在适当地篇幅里展示出来。
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In the past，I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and the corporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that there is a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of their organizations，depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms，or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. One simple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independently without direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towards the supervisor，who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience and research，such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with the employees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast，foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have the ability to make decisions on their own，though the extent to which this is true depends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. These organizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission to your well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program，but to impress upon you my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in both scholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based my decision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons，but rather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is that money and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives and that in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's inner needs. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift，and I intend to use this gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In the past，I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and the corporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that there is a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of their organizations，depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms，or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. One simple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independently without direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towards the supervisor，who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience and research，such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with the employees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.